sailing to singularity
perfect regularity
of waves hitting hull
perfecting simplicity
elective duplicity
of ebb and flow
of wax and wane
excited yet dull
trailing my perfidy
no train so tame
eliciting energy
treacherous thinking
my ship is sinking
because I’m bereft
of the ability to
not see the hole
and knot the whole
inciting incendiary
wrecking my wake
thinking of what it will take
to push me onto port
i sort and sort
and a braille breeze
felt and not seen
is not enough
not enough
to capture
my destiny
June 10, 2008 at 10:47 am |
i like most of all the braille breeze; that was lovely.
June 14, 2008 at 7:00 am |
This is the type of poem I always enjoy so much. How you’re able to rhythm so many word into perfection.
June 15, 2008 at 12:31 pm |
YAY!! you are back writing again!! hmmmm…maybe I should follow sometime soon?
June 16, 2008 at 5:51 pm |
Like floating down a stream…
July 4, 2008 at 8:52 pm |
Hope you’re enjoying your Summer, so far…..
July 9, 2008 at 12:15 am |
say I miss reading you – any fresh updates!?